1) Most people want to visit to Japan whereas Vietnam is the country that only one person wants to visit.

---> visit to Japan 는 visit Japan으로 고치세요.

--> whereas는 while로 고치세요. 

So I want to tell you Vietnam is how wonderful place to visit.

--> I want to tell you how wonderful place Vietnam is to visit으로 고치세요.

Now I’m going to talk about Vietnam’s tourist site, food and festival.

--> tourist site보다는 tourist destinations가 낫습니다.

(ppt 2) The first stage is Vietnam’s one of the most famous tourist attraction, Hanoi.

---> The first destination is Vietnam's one of the most famous tourist attractions, Hanoi.로

고치는 것이 좋습니다.

It is capital of Vietnam.

--> capital 에 정관사 the를 붙이세요.

At this city, you can visit Nha tho. In this place, a lot of restaurants and cafes are getting together. you can enjoy Vietnam’s coffee with condensed milk.

--> In this city 로 고치세요.

--> In this place는  Nha tho, where a lot of .....together and you can... milk there.로 

고치시면 좋겠습니다.   

And you can enjoy night market at 호안끼엠.

--> And you can also enjoy the night market at Hoàn Kiếm District.

It is opened every Friday to Sunday at 7 p.m. to 12 a.m..

--> opend는 open로 바꾸세요.

(ppt 3) Next I will talk to you about Vietnam’s food. In my thought, the most wellknown food is rice noodle. It is called ‘Pho’ in Vietnam.

--> Vietnam은 Vietnamese(베트남어)가 낫지 않을까요?  

Its noodle is made by rice instead of wheat. Because of strong spice, some people are unwilling to eat it.

--> made by rice는 made of rice (재료를 지칭)로 고치세요.  

Beside rice noodle, a lot of famous food are in Vietnam like 분짜, 짜조.

--> Beside 는 Besides 로 고치세요.

--> food는 foodsㄹ 고치세요.

--> 여기서 like보다는 such as Bun Cha and Cha Gio 가 낫습니다.

(ppt 4) For the last thing, I will introduce about Vietnam’s festival.

--> For the last thing 은 Finally 로 바꾸는 것이 좋겠습니다.  

--> introduce about는 그냥 introduce(타동사)로 쓰세요.

In every 14 in lunar month lamp festival opens in 호이안.

--> 14는 14th day 로 바꾸세요. 

--> 호이안은 Hoi An   

 Although you go to anywhere in 호이안, you can see beautiful light of lamps. On the river, you can also float the wish lamps. In addition there are many festival that you can enjoy such as tea festival, temple festival.

-->  Although you go to anywhere in 호이안 은  Wherever you go  in Hoi An으로 고치세요.

So, how was my introduction? (ppt 5) I talked about attraction of Vietnam, Hanoi. It has Nha tho and 호안끼엠. You can enjoy a cup of coffee with condensed milk and night market. The next thing I told you is Vietnam food. They have a lot of delicious food and I showed you one of the food, rice noodle. It is made by rice and has strong spice. Lastly I talked about lamp festival. It shows you beautiful light of lamps along the street and river of 호이안.

Now, you know Vietnam is how wonderful place is. So how about going to Vietnam for summer trip?

--> attraction of Vietnam, Hanoi는 attractive destination of Vietnam, Hanoi 가 낫습니다. 

--> Vietnam food는 Vietnamese food로 바꾸세요.

--> food는 foods로 쓰는 게 낫습니다, 예시를 하고 있으니까요.

--> one of the food 는 one of them 이 낫습니다.

--> made by rice는 역시 made of rice로 바꾸세요.

--> you know Vietnam is how wonderful place is.는 역시 you've got to know how wonderful place Vietnam is 로 바꾸세요.

--> for summer trip 보다는 for summer vacation이 나을 것 같습니다. 

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